Negatives Critique

Our negatives didn't show up.
we came to the conclusion that it was a probablem with the camera.
we even noticed before we shot that the camera that the numbers weren't moving and the camera wasn't winding so when out pictures came out, the entire negative strip was blank.

=(

Action.Story.Fill the Frame

ACTION AND EMOTION

I think this one shows alot of emotion.

Happiness. excitment. Focus is on egg and smile in the background captures the picture in "halves" face on one side and the beaker on the other half.

FILLING THE FRAME

I like this one because it fills the frame completely. The foreground is in focus and the girl is in the background and out of focus. but i do wish that she had a better look on her face...

This one tells a good story.
It's deep.
the act of him looking down at a "book" (maybe, probably, i mean he's in a library)
Then the small act of his other hand on the book on the shelf is getting his hands away from his body.
Like he is so interested in these books.


I do wish, though that the the book had a clever title on it. something that would be hinting at something.

like the books in the background be children's books and he has his hands on like an Einstein book or laws of physics or something complicated like that


hmm. sounds like a good photo idea...

Inspiring Picture

Sean RudinSecond PlaceAdv

BW Open2003

Fall Contest

Highland Park HS - Dallas, TX

I really like this picture because of the amount of feeling that is in it!

The lighting makes it all the better because if it was flat lighting the picture wouldn't have the meaning it does with such a high contrast photo!

~I'm hyper~

Pinhole PIX

No Person, No action.

guitar is in focus.

yes it is warped.

it is a fisheye style.

abnormally large in the front and tapering off towards the sides of the image.

Yes there is a person. (persons)

nothing is really in focus...

looks like someone was holding it...

warped opposite of the 1st image.

gets larger towards the sides of the picture.